Jamessmithss

Hi everyone,

I'm currently working on improving my writing skills and would really appreciate some constructive feedback on my latest essay. It's a short argumentative piece (around 800 words) on the topic of social media’s impact on mental health.

I'm not just looking for a pat on the back—I genuinely want to know what works, what doesn’t, and how I can make it better. If you have a few minutes to read and rate my essay, I’d be extremely grateful. Specific feedback on structure, clarity, tone, and argument strength would be super helpful!

Also, I found a useful tool here: https://myassignmenthelp.com/paper-checker.html – it helped me catch a few basic issues, but I’d love real human input too.

Feel free to be honest—but respectful. I’m here to learn and grow.

Let me know if you're open to exchanging reviews too. I’d be happy to return the favor!